tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5637369900115910529.post7515963005089881185..comments2010-04-28T05:04:16.184-07:00Comments on Reading: Allie Finkle's Rules for Girls: Stage Fright- November 17th, 2009170278http://www.blogger.com/profile/10874894883435547401noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5637369900115910529.post-27612435939770103652010-04-27T05:39:38.697-07:002010-04-27T05:39:38.697-07:00I liked how you made your connection because you d...I liked how you made your connection because you described it a lot of it so that the reader will understand. I didn't understand the part when you said" I would change this because I always think people shouldn't hate each other" I think you should say why and you misspelled some words.170557https://www.blogger.com/profile/03453388004910037076noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5637369900115910529.post-74318008356703559042010-04-24T02:58:26.031-07:002010-04-24T02:58:26.031-07:00I really liked how you made a connection from the ...I really liked how you made a connection from the story to your real life, and explained how you felt when you didn't get the part. I also liked the way you wrote about Allie's feelings. I think her Uncle was a big part of the story, because if her Uncle didn't tell her that every role is important, then Allie might not have realized it. You did a good job on what part of the story you will change about the book, because, you put in lots of your own thinking to that. Your book report was very good.170661https://www.blogger.com/profile/09676486023304361164noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5637369900115910529.post-30863560997403941522010-03-25T04:12:22.963-07:002010-03-25T04:12:22.963-07:00I really liked how you wrote a lot, about Allie&#...I really liked how you wrote a lot, about Allie's feelings, how she felt sad, and excited, about the school play that was coming up. I think, if I was Allie, I would feel really upset, when you practiced really hard, and you end up with another role. I think you also did a really good job, on how you explained a lot, on why you wanted to change that part, in the book, with your own strong feelings. Your summary, had gave me an big idea, of the story.170106https://www.blogger.com/profile/17703648524717078434noreply@blogger.com